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//**Patrick is a round very round skinny guy. Vey cool and stuff. He is 13 years old lives in a //big rock and does lots of stuff all day.//**//
//**//He likes to work out alot dispises blowing bubbles likes to go out and jelly fish hates going outside.//**//
 * //personality//**

//**Personal Narrative**//
====//**I**////**She asked me if I had played the wii and I said no but I was lieing you could see it in my eyes, my heart started to beat faster and faster. She asked me again, no than my brother was being a jerk so he said look the wii is on after he had turned the TV on, and i thought to my self oh no my head. So after that I admitted I played the the wii. That night we went to Burger King because I had lied in the past to go get my head shaved so my mom called Daniel up, that's my brother well anyway he is the one with the head trimmers, and i thought to my self oh no my hair is going to be gone.**//==== ====**//My mom said lets shave his head in the Burger King parking lot and every one laughed except for me. BUZZZZZZZZZZZZ cut cut cut all of my hair gone. we went home, I took a shower got all// got off the bus I walked to the house and called and asked her if i could play the wii, and she said no butt I did anyway and Ive lied in the past**==== ====//**and when they got home my brother sneaked around the house and looked in the window and saw that i was playing the wii so when my mom walked in and i turned off the TV and ran down stairs but i left the Wii on! BUMMMM BUMM BUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM.**//====

//**I came back upstairs and I acted like nothing happened but something did alright. My mom asked me if i had played the**//
====//**wii and i said no but than my brother walked in and said help put the groceries away, so i did and than the trouble started. We sat down at the table and started to talk because I played the wii when I was not to.**//==== //**the hair off of me. I went to school and got made fun of even Megan Garrison(she is like my sister) and Sam Owen ( my brother) but I got unset to it after a while.**//

//**Comments Below**//

good job this is really good and also very good details thanks sam